Wednesday, December 31, 2014

The Chosen Two

I wanted to write the most cliché fantasy story possible as a writing exercise. The characters felt like they caught on a paragraph in. This actually has potential. 


            “The Vyrax have infiltrated four outposts at our southern border, my King.”
            The only sound in the room was the king’s heavy breathing and the sound of rattling swords here and there and the odd spell getting shot off in the wizard’s tower on the far side of the castle. The messenger stood for a moment before the mad king, waiting for his response. The throne room stood deathly silent, like a crypt or a church or a brothel on a Sunday.
            “How many knights remain in my employ?” The king rasped.
            “Only three, your highness,” the master at arms said. “Silver, Rhesus, and Mander.”
            “The rest?”
            The master-at-arms was quiet. “You had them executed for treason.”
            I did no such thing!” The king leaped to his feet, face purple.
            “You said they were conspiring with the wizards to tame dragons and lay waste to your kingdom.”
            “That’s an absurd impossibility.” The king sat back down.
            “That’s what Vargas said when you had him executed.” The master-at-arms felt a little peevish. This was the third time someone—
            Without warning, there was a flash of light and the king’s head detonated, splattering gore across the throne room. The haggard courtiers, who had seen some pretty terrible things recently, reacted with amusement and boredom.
            “Well, this doesn’t solve our endemic problems,” the messenger said hesitantly.
            “Shut up, this isn’t all bad.” The Vizier was cleaning his nails, which were long and yellow and probably couldn’t be cleaned.
            “You shut up, you’re probably behind his assassination.”
            “I can’t do magic, you git.” The Vizier stood in a grand flourish of dark robes.
            “As if,” the master-at-arms scoffed, then suddenly looked terrified.
            “Well, we have only one choice for king.”
            “The chosen one!” The messenger looked proud.
            “Of course, the chosen one.” The master-at-arms was carefully trying to camouflage himself against a giant brocade tapestry with a female courtier’s wimple.
            “But there is a major problem,” the Vizier sneered. He really didn’t need to sneer, he thought. There’s really no major point in the character development to be sneering all the time. Perhaps he could smile next time? Wait, teeth. Sharp, rotten teeth are such a hassle to maintain. He satisfied himself by winking, which still felt predatory. “There are two possible chosen ones.”
            “Chosen two.”
            They all looked at who spoke. The Grand Wizard was mostly senile. He was thirty-two and had set off too many spells next to his head. Something about the thaumatic energy had melted something important in there. They didn’t know what, don’t ask. They aren’t brain surgeons; bones of Christ you’re inquisitive. Read the book. He spent most of his time rolling his wheelchair down spiral staircases on accident and telling people his name was Toe, so that’s what they called him.
            “Chosen two?”
            “We must send them on a quest. Possibly together.”
            The Vizier, master-at-arms, and messenger glanced at each other, questioning his sudden lucidity.
            “A quest?”
            “If they can stop the Vyrax threat, then we will have a real winner.”
            “Wait, won’t we have to have two kings if they stop it together?” The master-at-arms was having trouble processing all this. He glanced at the steaming stump of the king’s neck.
            “We could vote…” the messenger suggested.
            “Democracy.” The Vizier shuddered.
            “But then we wouldn’t have the benefit of a fantasy buddy-comedy,” Toe said.
            “Who are the chosen two?” the messenger asked.
            “The first is Mander, the knight.” The throne room visibly relaxed. Mander was sexy, strong, capable, well-rounded.
            “The second?” The Vizier was leaning forward.
            “His name is Jack the Petard.”
            “Jack the Retard?”
            “The Petard,” Toe said forcefully.
            “He blows stuff up,” the master-at-arms said, checking the king’s wrist for a pulse.
            “Well, why bother with the quest then?” the messenger asked. “Mander is our man.”
            “Rules are rules,” Toe said, before emitting a streamer of drool and lapsing back into silence.

            “Well,” sighed the Vizier. “Those Vyrax aren’t going to vanquish themselves.”

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